2011년 5월 2일 월요일

Assinment7 - Color Poem (21111461, 20111462, 20111465 ,20111470, 20111499)

PINK

Pink is the color of princess room

Pink is sweet like cotton candy in everland

Pink tastes like sweet candy from willy wonkers factory

Pink smells like fragrant flowers in garden

Pink looks like my lip when i go to meet my boy friend

Pink sounds like piano that my boy friend plays for me

Pink feels like happy couple that loves each others

Pink makes me fall in romantic love

Pink is mellow like oboe's  melody

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  1. Well done girls!^^ You worked hard at this. I appreciate it :)

    Some errors
    a princess's room (article plus 's' for possessive)
    Everland (capital letter)
    Willy Wonker (이름 capital letter)
    a garden (article)
    i (capital letter)
    boyfriend (all one word)
    a piano (article)
    a happy couple (article)

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